Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Week 6 Storytelling: Duryodhana and the Gandharvas


True destitution did suffer the brothers,
At hand of forest beasts.
They wandered now no more with mother,
Nor palace, gold nor feast.

And in this place they suffered shame
For sinful past endeavors.
And so their wife did suffer same
And all the six did weather

The pains of lowly living here
In forest now to dwell.
The six bore agony without peer.
Some horrors drawn from hell.

Now here the shame of noble pride
Duryodhana did display
And sought to attend to his cousins side,
View their poverty and dismay.

Each third year, as tradition bore,
A prince need the cattle brand.
So Duryodhana, with envy sore,
Assembled a royal band.

They left the city, proud, jubilant.
To find upon the road.
Deities there who passage would not grant.
And seeds of battle sowed.

The Kauravas then, their battle lost,
Bearing shame in their defeat.
The women, pride, and gold the cost.
Of the capture they did meet.

And through the woods swift word did pass.
To fall on Panadavan ear.
The brothers and their lovely lass
Cought word then of their peer.

And spite of wrongs in times then past,
Let noble blood then spring.
As noble blood did noble acts cast,
On which good men might sing.
To their cousins aid then rushed the six.
And rescued him post haste.
They fell into the fray, the mix,
And for battle had quite the taste.

The Gandharvas then were driven back
And released their royal burden.
All glories on Yudhisthira stack
Forbear all sufferings uncertain.

Gladly the brothers offered up
The freedom of their kin
And with their noble cousin supped
When the battle they did win.

But rajah met with pleasure pain,
And every gift resented.
For the Pandavas were their cousins bane.
And his loathing represented.

So the princes rescue brought only rage
And sorrow to his heart.
And against the will of his every sage
Wished from this world to part.

So the hateful raj then set aside
The gift of food and drink
Resolved to die for his swollen pride
He chose only to sit and think

And in his thoughts the daityas came
To their lord then to persuade.
Along with danavas who wished the same.
His death to dissuade.

At length enticing him with tales
Of battle and of glory.
He then gave up his austere death
For something bold and gory.

The prince returned then to his castle rich
And prepared his sacrifice
Power from the gods his wish
And his cousins to entice
With taunts of his glorious gifts
To bear this insult fresh
They hear his message and the mood then shifts
Hot anger burned through Bhimas flesh.

Though Yidhishthira just words replied
To insult far too dear.
Bhima, strong and fearsome cried
To bring his cousin fear.

Then when his sacrifice was made
And vows gainst kin he spoke
Good Karna swore Arjuna would be slayed
Beside the fires pungent smoke

Finally spies unto Pandavas rode
And recalled the awful scene
Yidhisthira knew that the omens bode
For his brother a fate quite mean

And sorrowed in the night so bleak
For those two men must fight.
And hardly then did dare to speak.
For he knew the good mens might.



 Author's Note: I was inspired to rewrite the piece in verse by a portfolio project I saw. I chose specifically this story because I felt it offered a wide variety of aspects of the story as well as some interesting imagery in the sacrifice and the battle.

Bibliography: Duryodhana and the Gandharvas, PDE Mahabharata

1 comment:

  1. Your story was so interesting, I have yet to read anything this semester that has been written in verse. Your story was filled with detail and seemed to really capture every little question that a reader might have for you. The imagery had to be my favorite part of the whole story, I thought that you did a really good job giving the reader the picture of what was happening. Well done, I can't wait to read more from you throughout this semester.

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