True
destitution did suffer the brothers,
At
hand of forest beasts.
They
wandered now no more with mother,
Nor
palace, gold nor feast.
And
in this place they suffered shame
For
sinful past endeavors.
And
so their wife did suffer same
And
all the six did weather
The
pains of lowly living here
In
forest now to dwell.
The
six bore agony without peer.
Some
horrors drawn from hell.
Now
here the shame of noble pride
Duryodhana
did display
And
sought to attend to his cousins’ side,
View
their poverty and dismay.
Each
third year, as tradition bore,
A
prince need the cattle brand.
So
Duryodhana, with envy sore,
Assembled
a royal band.
They
left the city, proud, jubilant.
To
find upon the road.
Deities
there who passage would not grant.
And
seeds of battle sowed.
The
Kauravas then, their battle lost,
Bearing
shame in their defeat.
The
women, pride, and gold the cost.
Of
the capture they did meet.
And
through the woods swift word did pass.
To
fall on Panadavan ear.
The
brothers and their lovely lass
Cought
word then of their peer.
And
spite of wrongs in times then past,
Let
noble blood then spring.
As
noble blood did noble acts cast,
On
which good men might sing.
To
their cousin’s aid then
rushed the six.
And
rescued him post haste.
They
fell into the fray, the mix,
And
for battle had quite the taste.
The
Gandharvas then were driven back
And
released their royal burden.
All
glories on Yudhisthira stack
Forbear
all sufferings uncertain.
Gladly
the brothers offered up
The
freedom of their kin
And
with their noble cousin supped
When
the battle they did win.
But
rajah met with pleasure pain,
And
every gift resented.
For
the Pandavas were their cousins bane.
And
his loathing represented.
So
the prince’s rescue
brought only rage
And
sorrow to his heart.
And
against the will of his every sage
Wished
from this world to part.
So
the hateful raj then set aside
The
gift of food and drink
Resolved
to die for his swollen pride
He
chose only to sit and think
And
in his thoughts the daityas came
To
their lord then to persuade.
Along
with danavas who wished the same.
His
death to dissuade.
At
length enticing him with tales
Of
battle and of glory.
He
then gave up his austere death
For
something bold and gory.
The
prince returned then to his castle rich
And
prepared his sacrifice
Power
from the gods his wish
And
his cousins to entice
With
taunts of his glorious gifts
To
bear this insult fresh
They
hear his message and the mood then shifts
Hot
anger burned through Bhima’s flesh.
Though
Yidhishthira just words replied
To
insult far too dear.
Bhima,
strong and fearsome cried
To
bring his cousin fear.
Then
when his sacrifice was made
And
vows ‘gainst kin he
spoke
Good
Karna swore Arjuna would be slayed
Beside
the fire’s pungent smoke
Finally
spies unto Pandavas rode
And
recalled the awful scene
Yidhisthira
knew that the omens bode
For
his brother a fate quite mean
And
sorrowed in the night so bleak
For
those two men must fight.
And
hardly then did dare to speak.
For
he knew the good men’s might.
Author's Note: I was inspired to rewrite the piece in verse by a portfolio project I saw. I chose specifically this story because I felt it offered a wide variety of aspects of the story as well as some interesting imagery in the sacrifice and the battle.
Bibliography: Duryodhana and the Gandharvas, PDE Mahabharata
Your story was so interesting, I have yet to read anything this semester that has been written in verse. Your story was filled with detail and seemed to really capture every little question that a reader might have for you. The imagery had to be my favorite part of the whole story, I thought that you did a really good job giving the reader the picture of what was happening. Well done, I can't wait to read more from you throughout this semester.
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